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Green eyes
Everywhere I look.
Green eyes
Read me like an open book.
Green eyes
Sparkle with delight.
Green eyes
Haunt my every night.
Really simplistic, I know. This one's a quickie. Middle-of-the-night poems generally are.

Photo creds to google images

Edit: jesus christ why you people like this so much? it's not even that good! probably for the preview image. GO LOOK AT MY GOOD STUFF SILLY PEOPLE NOT THIS DRIVEL
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bunk12bear Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
beautiful i've got green-grey eyes  that kind o shit  on a scale from bright green to slate grey  deepening on light, mood and i am not sure exactly  and am super proud of them, so this poem makes me super happy 
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TutisVII Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013
Exactly how I feel about them ^_^
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ancientdemonkind55 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012
this is simple but beautiful. my eyes are some what green but more like an ocean in that they change colour depending on light and my mood. some time si wish they would settle so i could tell if there realy green :p


ocean eyes its an intosting consept though thourally used
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anna232 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
So here ist the promised link :D

[link]
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yaoiofthewindclan13 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
cool! did you actually use the photo for it or not? Because I can't see it on the cover sorry ^^;
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anna232 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
you should see it now. It sometimes takes a few days until it appears.
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:iconanna232:
anna232 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hey, I have a question :D

Can I use your picture for my book cover?
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yaoiofthewindclan13 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
sure :D just curious: is the book for NaNoWriMo?
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anna232 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha, no. I donīt no what NaNo WriMo is.
Itīs for this website, where my book is.

[link]

and thats my old cover on this site :D
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yaoiofthewindclan13 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
NaNoWriMo is basically this challenge for National Novel Writing Month (November) where you attempt to write the first draft of a novel in a month.
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anna232 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah okay. :D No not for this, so thank you
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bamfg Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Professional Writer
i love green eyes , people with green eyes are one of a kind, be careful when loving them
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yaoiofthewindclan13 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I love green eyes too. Be careful when loving them? It seems it's already too late for me to back out of that at this point. Then again, certain beloved people do not love me back, so I completely see your point.
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Roses-to-Ashes Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
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Hope you enjoy! :)
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yaoiofthewindclan13 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
oh my goodness thank you so much! this means a lot to me, thank you!
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Roses-to-Ashes Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
My pleasure! :)
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Shadowstar1224 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012
I am a sonic fan and I find this offensive :(

But really, good job.
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yaoiofthewindclan13 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I'm sorry, I didn't mean to offend anyone. But, um, how is this related to sonic? It wasn't even implied, so I'm not sure how this could offend a sonic fan.
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Shadowstar1224 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012
It was a joke amongst the Sonic fanbase. I'm not actually offended in anyway shape or form.
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yaoiofthewindclan13 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Oh OK. Well I'm glad your not then :D

What is the green eyes thing though?
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Shadowstar1224 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012
There was a guy who complained about Sonic having green eyes and how it didn't tie in with how he had black eyes before. People found it funny to complain about, since his design doesn't change anything anyway.
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yaoiofthewindclan13 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
oh ok haha
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LinkyQ Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012  Student Photographer
As a green eyes owner I Like it :D
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yaoiofthewindclan13 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Ha thank you :D
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LinkyQ Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Student Photographer
Not at all ;) :D
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HappyElf Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012
Nice eyebrows ;D and I love green eyes so much <3
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yaoiofthewindclan13 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks :D and me too :)
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HappyElf Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012
:)
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DisneyPhan01 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Cool! :D Nice poem. :3




And now I can't stop imagining Sam talking about Danny Phantom. X'D
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yaoiofthewindclan13 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you very much :D

and that's funny because I have a friend named danny who we all call danny phantom who also has green eyes lol
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DisneyPhan01 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome! ^^



Heh, awesome. XD
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TigerSlinx Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ha, ha. Just changed my avatar, then saw this. Strangely enough, I call it green eyes too.
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yaoiofthewindclan13 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Ha that's cool! :D
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yamiaainferno Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012
All I'm thinking.
Is DirkJake.
Oh my God I am such a homestuck.
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yaoiofthewindclan13 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Sadly I do not watch Homestuck, though I need to at some point. Who's DirkJake? Or is it a pairing?
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yamiaainferno Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012
Uh...read Homestuck. It's a webcomic. And yes. XDD
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yaoiofthewindclan13 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Oh, right. Well that just proves how silly and not up-to-date when it comes to Homestuck I am lol.
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yamiaainferno Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012
Yeah. XDD
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blasiantubbie-01 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012
This is one of the best quickies!!! ;D

I like it a lot. Sometimes the simple things are the greater things.
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yaoiofthewindclan13 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Oh thank you so much! :D I'm glad you like it :hug:
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blasiantubbie-01 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012
No problem! :)
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Celestial-C Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012  Student General Artist
My Gooosh those eyes are glorious <3
i'll just have to settle with having practically black eyes. xD
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yaoiofthewindclan13 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Yeah I have brown eyes, so I feel your pain :XD:

The only thing semi-interesting about my eyes is that in direct sunlight they have a semi-gold ring around them
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ellenmellenn Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012
Sweet :) I like this a lot!
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yaoiofthewindclan13 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
thank you so much :D
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ellenmellenn Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012
You're welcome!!
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ILMLForever Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012
I wish my eyes looked like that...
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yaoiofthewindclan13 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
ha me too. I got the image from google images then upped the intensity and stuff of the eyes on iPhoto, so I don't think anyone has eyes like that naturally.
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GrumpyDragon Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012  Student General Artist
My eyes are green, but they'll never be that brilliant. ToT [link]
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yaoiofthewindclan13 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
you actually look kind of like who this poem is about. except her hair isnt that red.
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